ye dil bhi kya cheez hai
rehta mere seene me hai par dhadkta kahin aur hai
mujhe isse bas ek hi shikayat hai
jo ise mil nahin sakta bas usi ki ise chahat hai
dillagi ye karta hai
aur badnam hame karwata hai
shayri ye likhta hai
aur badnam shayar hame khelwata hai
ranjhe ko fakir isne banaya
ghalib ko shayar isne banaya
shehanshaon ka taaj zamin par ye laya
bas shikayat to yeh hai ki uske dil me ye pyaar na jaga paya
manta hun ki ye dil hai jo lahoo ko pak rakhta hai
janta hun rooh ka basera ye hai
par us rooh ka kya jiska dil hi na ho
mera kya jiska tu hi ek sahara na ho
dil ki chahat ki seema nahin
tujhe pane ke liye bhi mere waqt ki seema nahin
tujhse mujhe koi shikayat nahin
mujhe to dil se bas ek hi shikayat hai
jo ise mil nahin sakta bas usi ki ise chahat hai
3 comments:
the last two stanza seem to have lost touch. that being said,awesome imagination, awesome use of words..!!!
keep 'em coming!
might be this time....wud take that into acount next time....thanks for ur suggestion...and yup wait for more
kya likha hai bhai
maasha allah yaar
mazaa aa gya..
kya likhta hia tu yaar
rooh khush kar di
dil par aakar lagti hai teri saari baateinin sabhi
jiyo mere bhai
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