Jun 25, 2007

gar tera saath ho


gar humkadam ban ne ka wada karo
to is kadar hi nazmon ko likhta rahun
gar tum meri nisha ka chand bano
to is kadar hi jahan ko roshan karta rahun

fizaon ne bikhera hain lakhon jalwon ko
magar kisi ko maine dekha nahin
nazren padi jab tere jalwon par
to ab nazren hatana mujhe gawara nahin

khwabon me tarasha hai jisko maine
wo ishq-e-but tum ho
jis phool ko chaha hai maine
wo mehkta kamal tum ho

gar tera saath na ho
to teri yadoon ko kagaz aur lahoo ko sihai banunga 
zindagi ka safar chahe kam ho
par khuda tujhe bana ke jaunga

6 comments:

Chronus Ess said...

sath ho jo tera
dil ye dil na hoga
kar jaunga fiza tere naam
dil mein na sahi teri yaado(n)mein bas jaunga mai

Rakshit said...

zindagi ke har kadam pe apka humkadam sath ho,
yeh zaroori nahin,
har pal main khusi ho yeh bhi zaroori nahin,
humne yeh sikha hai kisi ko cha kar,
ki har humasfar se appko zindagi mile zaroori nahin............



yaar bahut saalon ke bad ek choti si kavita likhi wo bhi bas aise hi achi nahin lagegi to delete kar diyo....

but teri yeh kavita bahut aachi hai sidhe Dil ko chu kar nikal gayi

Bhuwan Gupta said...

@rakshit
bhai teri kavita bhi achi hai baat yenahin ki kitni badi hai ya chhoti bas 4 lines me bhi ye kai baatein keh gayi....keep on it man
waiting for a master stroke from u

Bhuwan Gupta said...

@ sumit nice try
u can get better but ur awesome with ur english writing dude...so want to see that more

Liar Goodspeed said...

mast. bilkul mast. bullet to the heart.

@rakshit "ki har humasfar se appko zindagi mile zaroori nahin.."
pyaar ki wisdom.
mera dost arjun kehta hai "pyaar ka matlab sirf haasil karna nahin hota hai."

Bhuwan Gupta said...

@ mohit tera dost arjun sahi kehta hai re....pyar to bas ho jata hai milna na milna zaroori nahin hota usme...